Maria - pixie of beaches

Okay, this is my second critique so. yeah, tell me if it's unfair.

Vision: A

The vision is perfect, but there's just one problem. The sparkles, they are a bit.. well, out. no offence, but the hair is so original and I love the wings, they look like little swirls. they are so cute:3 and soo. the slippers are normally like this for a "Pixie of beaches" so i'm gonna say AVERAGE.

Originality: A

as I said before, the hair is so original. so as the dress. but the Shoes look normal. so, a NORMAL human can wear them. but the hands are soo cool. such as the eyes, and I think i'm on another subject.

Technique: A

Your technique is perfect, and I love the fact that she looks like a little cotton candy xD but... The problem is the sparkles coming out of the dress, you should take one little practice on them. [No harsh feelings, right?]

Impact: A+++

Your impact is totally amazing, nothing's missing. i love everything. but i love the seashell on her head the most. she looks like a cotton candy I could eat her all up in the morning. be careful, I can eat her. :3